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Colton Merris's avatar

I like this poem a lot, and it was such a pleasure to hear Steve read it to the car club.

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Monica Drake's avatar

Wasn’t that an honor? So glad Steve read it, and so well…and that you were there!

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Natalie Hirt's avatar

Oh, I love this poem. It really resonated with me. The breathing in the room, the passage of time through breath, the question we ask of photographs, what did he/she want?

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Kari Luna's avatar

I'm so, so sorry for your loss, and glad he's on the page for you. "What are your dreams" struck me, beautiful words by a beautiful human. Thank you for sharing.

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Veronica's avatar

Thank you for sharing this really lovely poem. I am unfamiliar with/new to your father’s writing/poetry and so I all the more appreciate the link you included--I will explore it. 🙏🤓 Also looking forward to reading more of your writing in the days ahead.

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